Tuesday, February 27, 2007

Stupid Boy

Alligator River Story


I think that this story says that some people will do anything for the one that they love. In the beginning, Abigail loved Gregory so much that she gave up the one thing most precious to a woman, her virginity. If Ivan was a true friend to Abigail, he would have helped her in her time of need. It wasn’t right of Sinbad to take advantage of her when she was trying to get to Gregory across the river. It is pretty low of a man to do that to a poor, helpless girl like that. If Gregory was anything of a man and truly loved Abigail, He would have listened to her when she tried to explain her self to him. Instead of giving up and watching Gregory get beat up by Slug, Abigail should have kept pleading her case to Gregory till he started to believe her.

I am going to start with the lowest of the low and then work my way up from there. I would have to give a five to Sinbad because he took advantage of Abigail in her time of need and forced her to have sexual intercourse with him against her will. The fourth position would have to be deemed upon Abigail because she gave up on trying to plead her case with Gregory and instead got Slug to brutality beat him up. Next on the list would have to be Gregory. If he truly loved Abigail, he would have listened to her while she explained herself to him and not walked away from her when she needed him the most. The next to last position would have to go to Slug. Even though him and Abigail are friends, it was still not his place to get involved in something that is going on between Gregory and her. The number one spot goes to Ivan. The story really didn’t say much about him though. He did push Abigail away when tried to tell him what all was going on between her and Sinbad. I gave him the number one spot though because I feel that after what Abigail, Sinbad, Slug, and Gregory did, he did not seem like such a bad guy after all.

2 comments:

Brenna said...

Fail

You started off ok. There were too many grammar/punctuation errors. It was just barely over the 350 words minimum. I think you should have went into broader detail about your reasonings for giving each character the number you did. It was pretty dry to be honest. Try doing more paragraphs next time, and make sure you have a clear thesis sentence.

GRLucas said...

OK, pass. However, please consider with Brenna writes above.